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		<title>Comment on Identifying Your Three Presentation Audiences by RichMaggiani</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/09/23/identifying-your-three-presentation-audiences/comment-page-1/#comment-54609</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[RichMaggiani]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Jan 2019 21:41:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Sorry, just seeing this now. Yes, you can refer to my articles. I would appreciate getting a list of the people who attend your seminars with their email addresses as I will soon by publishing a book on presentation skills and would like to notify them of its publication.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sorry, just seeing this now. Yes, you can refer to my articles. I would appreciate getting a list of the people who attend your seminars with their email addresses as I will soon by publishing a book on presentation skills and would like to notify them of its publication.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Identifying Your Three Presentation Audiences by Tinna Gonzales</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/09/23/identifying-your-three-presentation-audiences/comment-page-1/#comment-53586</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Tinna Gonzales]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 26 Sep 2018 02:59:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi. I am currently looking for some reference materials for a Seminar-Workshop on How to Become an Effective Presenter and luckily I found your articles.

The said seminar-workshop will be intended for people who are in the travel and tours industry, and whose business requires a lot of marketing. 

May I ask permission to use your articles as one of my references? 

Thank you.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi. I am currently looking for some reference materials for a Seminar-Workshop on How to Become an Effective Presenter and luckily I found your articles.</p>
<p>The said seminar-workshop will be intended for people who are in the travel and tours industry, and whose business requires a lot of marketing. </p>
<p>May I ask permission to use your articles as one of my references? </p>
<p>Thank you.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Another Take on Editing: Three New Levels by Rich Maggiani</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/07/19/another-take-on-editing-three-new-levels/comment-page-1/#comment-4090</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Rich Maggiani]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jul 2012 20:33:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Cynthia, I&#039;ll make a list of people who contact me, then get back to you with details on getting a copy.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cynthia, I&#8217;ll make a list of people who contact me, then get back to you with details on getting a copy.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Another Take on Editing: Three New Levels by Cynthia Herrmann</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/07/19/another-take-on-editing-three-new-levels/comment-page-1/#comment-4087</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Cynthia Herrmann]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Jul 2012 19:00:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Interesting perspective. I would love to review Levels of Technical Editing.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting perspective. I would love to review Levels of Technical Editing.</p>
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		<title>Comment on An Editor: Your First Reader and Collaborator by K.Vee.Shanker.</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/03/24/an-editor-your-first-reader-and-collaborator/comment-page-1/#comment-3866</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[K.Vee.Shanker.]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 15 May 2012 14:01:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yes, this is a well written article. I&#039;ve been doing editing for some time, and I always felt that writers do not realize the value of editing. I wish, all writers read this article. I want to highlight the major point in the article here. While forwarding the writeup for editing, it is better, the writer gives a short note on the point(s) the writer wants to communicate to the reader. Incidently, this has to be done before writing and the self-edit must also be from this point of view.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yes, this is a well written article. I&#8217;ve been doing editing for some time, and I always felt that writers do not realize the value of editing. I wish, all writers read this article. I want to highlight the major point in the article here. While forwarding the writeup for editing, it is better, the writer gives a short note on the point(s) the writer wants to communicate to the reader. Incidently, this has to be done before writing and the self-edit must also be from this point of view.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Nine Tasks of an Editor by Sandy Chizinsky</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/04/20/the-nine-tasks-of-an-editor/comment-page-1/#comment-3786</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sandy Chizinsky]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Apr 2012 20:38:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Once again, thank you for helping people to understand the value of professional editing. Authors generally have a good sense of what they want to accomplish with a piece of writing, but they may know more about the subject itself than about how to present it. In the same way that authors are subject-matter experts, editors are specialists in the written word: they know how to make the writing support the message. For practical reasons, putting one person in charge of a complex document like an RFP makes sense; an editor has both the &quot;macro&quot; perspective (&quot;Is everything here, and is it structured according to the requirements?&quot;) and the &quot;micro&quot; perspective (&quot;This number doesn&#039;t match the one on the previous page---which one is correct?&quot;) to keep things on track.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Once again, thank you for helping people to understand the value of professional editing. Authors generally have a good sense of what they want to accomplish with a piece of writing, but they may know more about the subject itself than about how to present it. In the same way that authors are subject-matter experts, editors are specialists in the written word: they know how to make the writing support the message. For practical reasons, putting one person in charge of a complex document like an RFP makes sense; an editor has both the &#8220;macro&#8221; perspective (&#8220;Is everything here, and is it structured according to the requirements?&#8221;) and the &#8220;micro&#8221; perspective (&#8220;This number doesn&#8217;t match the one on the previous page&#8212;which one is correct?&#8221;) to keep things on track.</p>
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		<title>Comment on An Editor: Your First Reader and Collaborator by Sarah Baca</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/03/24/an-editor-your-first-reader-and-collaborator/comment-page-1/#comment-3750</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Sarah Baca]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Mar 2012 17:05:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great article! I do some editing at work and this will be helpful to remember as I work. Thanks for this!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great article! I do some editing at work and this will be helpful to remember as I work. Thanks for this!</p>
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		<title>Comment on An Editor: Your First Reader and Collaborator by Geoff Hart</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/03/24/an-editor-your-first-reader-and-collaborator/comment-page-1/#comment-3745</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Geoff Hart]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Mar 2012 12:04:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great post, Rich. The idea of editor as partner, not as vindictive upholder of the style guide, is one that I teach every chance I get -- including at a workshop this Friday. I&#039;ve been doing this for nearly 25 years now, and it has greatly enriched my relationships with authors from around the world, across a sometimes surprising diversity of cultures and languages. We produce great things when we work together rather than at cross-purposes.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post, Rich. The idea of editor as partner, not as vindictive upholder of the style guide, is one that I teach every chance I get &#8212; including at a workshop this Friday. I&#8217;ve been doing this for nearly 25 years now, and it has greatly enriched my relationships with authors from around the world, across a sometimes surprising diversity of cultures and languages. We produce great things when we work together rather than at cross-purposes.</p>
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		<title>Comment on An Editor: Your First Reader and Collaborator by Linda Oestreich</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/03/24/an-editor-your-first-reader-and-collaborator/comment-page-1/#comment-3744</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Linda Oestreich]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Mar 2012 17:11:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Rich,
Great article...and it reminds me of a presentation I&#039;ve given over the years...Editing with Heart.  I have always said that the editor&#039;s job is to support the writer and help--not hinder--their success. Glad to see someone else coming from the same direction.

Thanks,
Linda O]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rich,<br />
Great article&#8230;and it reminds me of a presentation I&#8217;ve given over the years&#8230;Editing with Heart.  I have always said that the editor&#8217;s job is to support the writer and help&#8211;not hinder&#8211;their success. Glad to see someone else coming from the same direction.</p>
<p>Thanks,<br />
Linda O</p>
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		<title>Comment on Where Are You Going with that Presentation? by Lori Meyer</title>
		<link>http://www.solari.net/toward-humanity/2012/02/14/where-are-you-going-with-that-presentation/comment-page-1/#comment-3723</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Lori Meyer]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Mar 2012 05:42:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Thanks for this great post, Rich...it&#039;s filled with practical tips for anyone preparing a presentation. Even more important, however: It provides a call for presenters to put both their minds and hearts to work in determining just what they want to give to their audiences...and to themselves. I&#039;m preparing a presentation for a conference in April -- and your post will be one of the tools I will refer to in my efforts to &quot;know where I am going,&quot; so I can give my audience the clarity and insight they deserve.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for this great post, Rich&#8230;it&#8217;s filled with practical tips for anyone preparing a presentation. Even more important, however: It provides a call for presenters to put both their minds and hearts to work in determining just what they want to give to their audiences&#8230;and to themselves. I&#8217;m preparing a presentation for a conference in April &#8212; and your post will be one of the tools I will refer to in my efforts to &#8220;know where I am going,&#8221; so I can give my audience the clarity and insight they deserve.</p>
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